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Update README.md to improve grammar

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- Using hyphens to combine "web-based" ensures that the reader understands that it is a compound modifier.
- Adding a comma after "platform" helps to separate the list of items that follows and improve readability.
- Using commas to separate the list of items in the series (CMDB, helpdesk system, and document management tool) helps to clarify that each item is a distinct element.
- Fixed a typo where "adds-on" was written instead of "add-ons".
- Uses the wrong form of the verb "be." In this context, the correct form of the verb to use is "become," not "being." 
- Adding a comma after led is grammatically better as is referenced here: https://github.com/Combodo/combodo-workflow-graphical-view/pull/1
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iTop stands for IT Operations Portal. It is a complete open source and web based IT service management platform including a fully customizable CMDB, a helpdesk system and a document management tool. It is ITIL compliant and easily customizable and extensible thanks to a high number of adds-on and web services to integrate with your IT.
iTop stands for IT Operations Portal. It is a complete open source and web-based IT service management platform, including a fully customizable CMDB, a helpdesk system, and a document management tool. It is ITIL compliant and easily customizable and extensible thanks to a high number of add-ons and web services to integrate with your IT.
iTop also offers mass import tools to help you being even more efficient.
iTop also offers mass import tools to help you become even more efficient.
## Features
- Fully configurable [Configuration Management (CMDB)][10]
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## About Us
iTop development is sponsored, led and supported by [Combodo][0].
iTop development is sponsored, led, and supported by [Combodo][0].
[0]: https://www.combodo.com